Peer review reflection

My first blog post seemed to be stronger than my second as it is more descriptive and more informative on the topic. I was told the first blog post about the strip is very to the point and interesting to the reader but the second one doesn't exactly have a strong point to convey. My goal was to explain how unity and pride are so apparent within the strip district by tying together the steel industry with restaurants that are run on a more personal basis. The comments focused more on how I should describe the dishes these restaurants offer but that is for a different blog post. I think this means that I need to make my intro stronger and clearer so that the meaning of the blog post isn't misunderstood.